Wednesday, April 28, 2010

Diary of Mercutio 2

My friend where did you go and don’t come back?

Your body freed and souls now freed oh boy

Have you think men who worry you? you boy?

You lost and found by us, and now you say

Man Peace man peace you boy in love too deep

The word you use is not for you no more

If love catch you, me guard will break now on

Your naïve heart is too soft to take a love

Your heart is hot though it is cold as frost

Your burning heart will hurt itself so soon

Sunday, April 25, 2010

diary of Mercutio

Diary of Mercutio

Oh Romeo you indecisive boy

I could have died because of you my friend

You made me speak a thousand words for you

and made me late for party at the day

You little boy get out of childish dream

And see the fancy flowers at the hall

Though friend like I may cheer for you to go

You coward shun the light of girls in world

Your love was curse that witch spell to catch you

But you will break the curse with two friend’s help

And lights of Rose will free you from the fear.

Your dream covered the truth of wonder world

I beg, you See the garden of eden, boy

Your love is bloom, but world is springtime hill

Enjoy the bloom all o’er the place, so do

We friends art doll but therapist for you

I promise you that you will see the world.

Sunday, February 7, 2010

Sail

I was captain of ship 'Avalon'. Sadly, I and crews met huge wave. It was dark night and no one expected to meet such huge wave. huge wave hit the starboard of ship and made huge hole. every single crew overboarded. Fortunately, I was found by some indians, and I just left their town with little foods and boat

Now I am stuck in the middle of sea. I can't believe that I forgot to make paddle. I am floating around. I have a fishing rod, and it is only thing I have now. I could eat fishes from sea, and turtles. problem is there are so many sharks around this place. I can't fish nor catch turtle.

Many days has passed. I didn't eat nor drink for a while. all I have is stupid fishing rod, and this boat. so thirsty... As soon as I thought about water I remembered people can drink their own pee as a water. I couldn't think that is nasty. I could do anything if I can survive and go bakc to home. I can't do anything now.

Thursday, January 28, 2010

paper bag

While I read poem "paper bag" I feel sadness. In my head I can only imagine girl hurt her feeling and hide her beautiful face with ugly paper bag. it was too sad. I think it was pretty good poem even though there was not many imageries and metaphors or something like that. I think it was good because it made me imagine this sad sight indirectly.

This poem was was a bit hard to understand. When we paraphrase it was pretty easy but problem was it was too easy so it kind of confused us its easy words made us to think in difficult way. Also it was kind of tricky because it was hard to connect title and words like halloween.

Wednesday, January 20, 2010