Monday, January 18, 2010

slam poem


People listen o what I say

I am full of sorrow

I cry for things in pocket



parents never check their pocket

parents never check our pocket

and I found my empty pocket



I can't see any paper or metal in my pocket

No one cares about my pocket

I need something fill my pocket



Parents put your hand in your pocket

give me soething that can fill my pocket

Or I will hate your



open your eyes

open your mind

then open my empty pocket



I want to see green paper

I want to see benjamin franklin

I want to see king saejong



if I find blue paper

or shining old men

I will hate you





Writing slam poem was quite fun. expressing my feelings was good, and make fun of things that I don't like was fun. it was easier than other poems because there was no limit, and we could find topics around us very quickly. we could satirize anything that I hate. While I write, I could find myself excited with writing poem, and for me it was huge change. it was quite fun to listen other's poem and their response toward poem that other read minute ago. While I perform I was full of worry because people might not understand.

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